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What Happens in Kampas: 1

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First page: this one!
Next page: Page 2

I mentioned in the comments of fav.me/d6eovny that I had inspired myself to make a comic.
Now, I'm bad at comics for two reasons:
1. Can't panel worth shit.
2. No dedication whatsoever, so it usually gets left and never finished.

This is just a short one, so I'd better fucking finish it. I'm thinking I'll pop up one or two pages a week which gives me plenty of time to finish them.
They're all inked except the last page set (which is a fucking double spread which will kill me.) And the panelling turned out better than I thought it would, but I'll take any comments and critiques I can get.
I won't be changing this comic, but I'll definitely apply them in the future.

Also: cell (ish) shading!

EDIT: With thanks to ~3imad and ~phrenologik for their feedback, unfortunately because the pages are all drawn out already and I'm lazy I can't do much about the mix of traditional and digital that Phrenologik mentioned, but I have fixed the HERPADERP that I did with the first panel. Ark is now facing the right direction. It's supposed to be looking right (it's right, not the reader's) and then turn left when the arm appears.
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Perforex's avatar
I think you did ok with the paneling! The comic looks exciting, I will nag you if you don't finish it *nod*