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Bringing Down the Sky
SoulSilver Nuzlocke
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Chp11-190
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This did not quite work in execution. So I'm going to write some stuff that described what I wanted to happen in this page with the four inset panels.


The world seemed to hold its breath as the sun hung, blistering orange above the Black Mountains.  The air was still.  The sun seemed to break apart like ripples in water as it continued its slow descent.
In Ecruteak, dark smoke billowed from the burned tower.  It snaked, whispered and moved unassisted by a windless evening.

Lower.  Until it was a sliver.  Lower until it was nothing more than a bright shimmer.  It seemed to gasp for breath, a jet of bright points briefly shooting up, reflecting off the sky.  Then darkness.

The burned tower roared into flame.

The night hung darkened by the coming storm and the starless night.


I miss writing to be honest, feels really clunky when I do it now because it's been so long.
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